I'm quite pleased with my finished visual diagram - I like the aesthetic and minimal colour palette that is maintained throughout it. The comic style is less comic-y that I'd originally envisioned, but I just ran out of time, and think it looks okay as it is. I hope that it still conveys the idea of a comic, at least.
What I'm most pleased with about this is the lack of text; as I was focusing my diagram on being quiet, I thought it would be quite smart to have no words in it (except for the small 'shh' at the bottom). However, although I am pleased with it, I'm also a bit worried that people just won't 'get' it, as it's not an explicit diagram.
Strengths:
- consistant style and colour palette
- (hopefully) a charming look at silence
- subtle use of narrative
Weaknesses:
- Format doesn't work as well as I'd have liked
- Perhaps not explicit enough/difficult to understand
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